drabble

Feb. 19th, 2004 01:01 am
[personal profile] soundczechfic
I can't decide if this is a false start or a drabble.

Justin Taylor likes the lights at Babylon. The heat of them, the colour, the way they make everything seem like nothing. He likes the way the light catches the planes of Brian's face, the way Brian will smile at him when he thinks Justin isn't looking.

He likes the backroom. The smell of it, the moistness in the air. The way it's so fucking dirty, cacophanous with the bleats and moans of the assembled men. He likes that he can walk in and have his pick, because he's Justin Fucking Taylor, and even Brian Fucking Kinney will stop and smile for him, reach out for him, hold his gaze as some investment broker sucks him off.

He likes the guys leaning against the bar that know his name and the story of his life up until now. He is someone, here. Someone fucking special, heir to the throne of the Kingdom of Babylon. Supreme fucking Ruler, sometimes, when Brian is too high to bother or care. He knows the power he holds. Justin thinks that one day, he might have use for this power, and so he exercises it wisely. Unless he wants free drinks, and then he's exercising it all over the place.

"You know, it's not polite to be a cocktease," Brian tells him one day, when Justin wheedles four shots of tequila and an expensive imported beer from a brown-eyed man. Brian turns and addresses the guy with feigned sympathy, snagging the bottle from Justin's hands. "He's not going to deliver, you know. You've just wasted thirty bucks."

"He's cute," Justin objects. "This was going to be my last drink."

"Yeah," Brian agrees. "It was, 'cause we're going home."

Brian smiles and pats the guy on the cheek, promises to blow him some time, and then they leave.

Justin would object, but Brian's bed is usually where he wants to be anyway.

Date: 2004-02-18 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eleveninches.livejournal.com
*filled with love*

Date: 2004-02-18 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikkrp.livejournal.com
this is brilliant. just as is.

but please, ma'am, for the love of all that is decent and holy gay and lovey.... MORE Justinhasaboyfriend!FIC please...

Re:

Date: 2004-02-18 03:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikkrp.livejournal.com
Or, you know, Love is an Endurance Sport, if you wanna get technical about it.

Date: 2004-02-18 03:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] on-to-us.livejournal.com
Amazingly beautiful the way 'tis, BUT! That doesn't mean I wouldn't want more. Great dialogue, excellent characterization, and, god, poor Drinks!Guy. I like your Justin!

-E

Date: 2004-02-18 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] josselin.livejournal.com
I have a weird *thing* about drabbles so I think you should call it a false start.

But then, as you know, I have weird things about every other thing in the history of the universe and you probably don't want to plan your life around my neuroses, however cute they may be.

Re:

Date: 2004-02-18 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikkrp.livejournal.com
Would either of you be up for providing me some critical (read:HONEST) feedback?

Re:

Date: 2004-02-19 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soundczech.livejournal.com
i'm terrible at being critical. Joss is brilliant at it. Ask her.

Re:

Date: 2004-02-19 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rikkrp.livejournal.com
She agreed, thanks.

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Date: 2004-02-18 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wrenlet.livejournal.com
That's my fault, isn't it; I gave you drabble-allergy.

Date: 2004-02-19 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soundczech.livejournal.com
Planning my life around your neuroses is bloody tiring. Also, you've written drabbles. Sort of. You've written really short fics before.

Date: 2004-02-19 02:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] josselin.livejournal.com
When? I can't remember. (Not that that really means anything since I forget everything.)

I've posted fics in really short bits, sure, but have I really written anything finished that was that short?

Date: 2004-02-19 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soundczech.livejournal.com
not that short. but pretty short. maybe not drabble-short, you're right.

Date: 2004-02-18 05:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] estella7.livejournal.com
He is someone, here. Someone fucking special, heir to the throne of the Kingdom of Babylon.

*nods*

Good stuff.

Date: 2004-02-18 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cherprudence.livejournal.com
...from a brown-eyed man.

I LOVE that detail. I dunno why, but it just.. speaks volumes about the scene! LOVE!

Date: 2004-02-18 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] altricial.livejournal.com
I think it works perfectly as a drabble. I love it. So much love yet so understated and quiet. <333

Date: 2004-02-19 12:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluesmoke.livejournal.com
power-tripping justin is totally the cutest ever!

hmmm... i really like the dynamics between brian and justin-- it's definitely a look at the way the "power" of the relationship is out of control. it's like: justin has power over brian, but ultimately justin does what brian wishes, because they both want the same thing (?).

lol.

Date: 2004-02-19 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ranalore.livejournal.com
Oh, I like this. For all kinds of reasons, not least that I love to see Brian and Justin in action as the Power Couple of Liberty.

Date: 2004-02-19 07:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soundczech.livejournal.com
It's a kink of mine, too. *blush*

Date: 2004-02-19 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonwind-rising.livejournal.com
I really like this. Because anything which has Justin and Brian reigning over Babylon - and the whole power trip thing, and the free drinks, well. Yes. So, I really really like this.

Date: 2008-02-12 06:02 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
i have a weird *thing* about smells, so i think you should change your name to smellczech.

Date: 2010-10-08 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] youriseabove.livejournal.com
Oh my god anonymous Sir, I just have to love this two years too late. *loves* If I ever met you good citizen I would kindly offer you my odor eater. And love this drabble, it's very power trippy and hints to the spaces where Justin finds love in Brian's inebriated ignorance instead of well, ignorance or as I like to call it selective consciousness *more love* 8)

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