“You little asshole,” Ryo growls, but that’s when he kisses him, and it’s completely different to Ayumi, all teeth and sharp corners where she was round and smooth like a lozenge.
THANK YOU for using an unconventional simile there. I think if I read that something else is like "marbles" or "cinnamon" I'm going to just start backspacing, even if the rest is brilliant.
The paragraph about what Tego has had to do in JE had me lol'ing.
I liked this, I don't read anything f/f either but it was good. DON'T BE SORRY.
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Date: 2007-06-12 07:25 am (UTC)THANK YOU for using an unconventional simile there. I think if I read that something else is like "marbles" or "cinnamon" I'm going to just start backspacing, even if the rest is brilliant.
The paragraph about what Tego has had to do in JE had me lol'ing.
I liked this, I don't read anything f/f either but it was good. DON'T BE SORRY.